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Fluffy snowflakes tumbling down
Sparkling just like diamonds on a crown
Dressing up the world in perfect white-
Billions of winter butterflies in flight.

I raise my face towards the sky
Then butterflies kiss me and die.

But I'm not sad and neither they
This is a game we've always liked to play.
I know they love it just as much as I,
My winter butterflies that snow from sky.
©2006-2009 ~Ocalikecoca
:iconocalikecoca:

Author's Comments

Edit 27.03.2008 winner of the 3rd place ;)


Edit 19.03.2008 This poem takes part in the Nature Contest held by :iconpoetsclub: Vote for me in their poll if you like it /Edit

One happy poem, for one sad journal

`annejulie GAVE ME THE PERMISSION to use her deviation Neige to illustrate my poem. So CREDIT for the PREVIEW image goes to her.
Doesn't it seem like especially made for my poem? :heart:

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:iconingrid-amelia:
love it!!!

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i saw a flower this morning..... and i thought it was the most beautiful thing.... until i gazed my eyes upon you
:iconocalikecoca:
Am glad you do. :laughing: this approval emoticon is super funny.
:highfive:

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So much to take
So many more to give-
Feelings to awake,
Experiences to live.
:iconsilvarith:
i like the idea itself and my fav. line is the 'kiss me and then die"
awesome, girl!

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Rise and Shine, mothafucka!:dygel:
:iconocalikecoca:
yes you drama queen :giggle: you spotted the weird dramatism in there. IThat one is my fav too. Thank you :bow:

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So much to take
So many more to give-
Feelings to awake,
Experiences to live.
:iconsilvarith:
no problemo. get it...problEMO ...*chuckles* oh sometimes i just hav g33ky fuhn :P

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Rise and Shine, mothafucka!:dygel:
:iconocalikecoca:
:lmao: hello! got it. get it HELL o

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So much to take
So many more to give-
Feelings to awake,
Experiences to live.
:iconsilvarith:
:lmao: imagine if you r trying to type JellO and mistype it into hellO. that wud suck.
typo gets to me bwahaha:rofl: ...k m dorky..

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Rise and Shine, mothafucka!:dygel:
:iconocalikecoca:
oh my got some troubles with typos, like in gay instead of gaz :rofl:

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So much to take
So many more to give-
Feelings to awake,
Experiences to live.
:iconsilvarith:
rofl!... that would cause a different Boom :P of its own.

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Rise and Shine, mothafucka!:dygel:

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